Drama Korea berjudul TWELVE ini sangat dinantikan banyak orang di tahun 2025. Pertama kali ditayangkan pada tanggal 23 …
Changes Made and Why:
- "Drama Korea TWELVE menjadi salah satu serial yang paling ditunggu kehadirannya" changed to "Drama Korea berjudul TWELVE ini sangat dinantikan banyak orang." – More straightforward and less formal. "Sedang dinantikan" (being anticipated) is simpler than "kehadirannya" (its presence).
- "Tayang perdana pada 23…" changed to "Pertama kali ditayangkan pada tanggal 23…" – Using "pertama kali" (first time) adds clarity and readability. "Tanggal" (date) is explicitly added for better understanding.
- Overall: The language is adjusted to be more conversational and avoid complex sentence structures. The words used are commonly understood in everyday Indonesian. The goal is to make it easy for anyone to grasp the meaning quickly.
