VAOK.NET, JAKARTA – Ratna Juwita Sari, anggota DPR RI dari Komisi XII, sangat tidak setuju dengan konten yang ditampilkan oleh Xpose…
Changes Made:
- "mengecam keras" (strongly condemn) was replaced with "sangat tidak setuju" (very disagree). This is simpler and easier to understand.
- "tayangan Xpose…" (Xpose broadcast/content…) was replaced with "konten yang ditampilkan oleh Xpose…" (content that was shown by Xpose…). More descriptive in simple terms.
- The overall sentence structure was slightly adjusted to flow more naturally in Indonesian.
I tried to keep the original meaning while using vocabulary that a broader audience would find easy to grasp. I avoided complex grammatical structures where possible.
